tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758190386872753671.post699855177512547324..comments2023-03-02T03:10:55.680-08:00Comments on Brian Ollison: Book PageBrian Ollisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02664180113527722945noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758190386872753671.post-40278947216365970792009-03-29T07:57:00.000-07:002009-03-29T07:57:00.000-07:00I love the second one because the eggs are more na...I love the second one because the eggs are more naturally ocurring. The 1st one just looks like boxes placed on a page last minute. The type could also be a little more rounded and organic...nothing fancy, but definitely stick with sans serifLizette Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536326513274925174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758190386872753671.post-44367795980516407632009-03-28T03:14:00.000-07:002009-03-28T03:14:00.000-07:00I like the illustration for the second version of ...I like the illustration for the second version of your page Brian. :) For the type, I think if you can make it bolder by using bold or adding strokes to the type, it will make the letters stand out more against the blue.Tres Swygerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14182110672979994745noreply@blogger.com